FakePlasticMan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flight Of The Pheonix-with vox]

Much better this time around!

I'm very pleased to see you worked hard on this. As some people have said in previous versions, the kick kinda overloads the song in many parts, but nevertheless, the drums work well with the parts in the song. The vocals are pretty nice, your standard metal growl, nothing too special, but well executed. Guitars were well executeed, better then the times before. Great work, show me whenever you have new stuff up.

darkkloud responds:

thanks alot man, i followed some instructions from another author on here, which actually worked out pretty well.

[[-Raise-]]

Cool tune

Nice work, melodies are solid, production is excellent.

Bytt-Batteriet responds:

koolio.

[Speedmetal's Rock Loop]

Very cool

I thought the guitar was off at first, but another listen through proved me wrong. Good work, the chord pattern is very dynamic, allows for active listening.

Yours,
R.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Hey man thanks a lot for your compliments.

[{ND} Party Rave [FULL]]

Awesome work

This was very cool. Just a few things to recommend. The transition into the "second half" that you added could be a little smoother. Also, instead of repeating the same snare roll, you could try adding in other varied fills. I like these chords in the new section, sound like 4ths to me. The song ends rather abruptly, maybe make it a huge breakdown with pummeling kick or something? Haha, thats just what i like, do what you want. Nice work.

Natedog102 responds:

Lol, yeah, I know....I messed up on "the second" half I guess you can say. I'll work on it in future submisions :) Thanks for the reviews anyways! And the 9. I'll take what I can get lol.

-Nate

[Enlightened by the Night]

Cool

Yay, 6/8 time! I absolutely LOVE electronic music in anything other then 4/4 time. Very nice work.

LoneEagle responds:

Haha thanks man :D

Thanks a bunch for the reviews that you left me, i'll make sure to check your stuff when i get a chance to.

[The Search for Heaven]

Simply Beautiful

This was extremely well done, your effort shines through. Just be careful about the whole sticking bass into two seperate speakers. Bass is almost always better center-panned. Anything else might make your track off balance. Its a delicate situation, but with your hard work ethic that shows here, I'm sure you can work it out.

Yours,
R.

LoneEagle responds:

I learned my lesson about bass lol. I still think that it is a "neat" concept though, two bass lines, but the distortion is noticeable and i agree with you that just one bass line is sufficient.

Thanks for the review, R.

[omni world]

Not bad at all

A little repetitive, but thats to be expected with most electronic music eh? Just check your levels like the guy suggested earlier and youre set.

zerofalse responds:

hah. yeah, glad yo liked it
well, i didnt really notice the static in the backround untill i got reveiws and listend a little more closely. well, thanks! ill review some of your stuff

[{ND} Party Rave [DEMO]]

Oh yes

Totally finish it. I love what you have so far. I love the break with the hi hats that goes right into that powerful kick and melody. Brilliant. The kick will probably have to be turned down a fair amount though, just so your bass doesnt overpower the mix. Work hard on the mix, and this will be excellent.

Natedog102 responds:

OK, thanks for the advice man!

-Nate

[YC-Armagetron]

Pretty Good

The percussion is a bit loud for my taste though. And the melody gets a tad repetitive and annoying. But you layered enough harmony over it to keep me listening. I think a better mix would make this even better.

Young-Chesta responds:

yea i know its a bit repetitive and im thinking about making a remix in a while but thanks for the review