FakePlasticMan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[GuilmonX-00007]

Cool

Nice work, it will serve its purpose well.

TheCon-Sept responds:

It's a theme for Resistance: Fall Of Man...

[In Love with the Enemy]

Absolutely beautiful.

That bell melody is very haunting, excellent work.

[Heart Grenade]

Could improve

I liked the modulation on the synth throughout, however a trance tune would normally contain many more instruments. I saw a review before where you said you had some on there before, but you took them out because you thought it sounded worse. I think if you figured out how to mix those other audio tracks in there better, it would make the entire mix a lot clearer, and as an added bonus, you would have a much more diverse sound. Keep trying.

Yours,
R.

Dawei responds:

Well, I will work on one, maybe in a bit, but with those other tracks were in, it wouldn't be trance so I'll work on it, and keep checking back, there should be a different version of this in here

[Part 1 of Instrumental]

Work a bit harder

Guitar sounds out of tune and completely random. No structure as far as a "riff" or a "pattern". Vocals incomprehensible (but i did read this was an accident, so you are forgiven). Work harder to create guitar riffs that are more creative, even simple lines can have great effect. Unless you were going for an avant-garde noise shizl sort of thing, this probably is not going to rate up as your best work. Keep trying, if you have problems with anything i can always help.

Yours,
R.

Dawei responds:

i made this 2 years ago. trust me, it's not my best, that was a horrible thing and i just like putting my horrible stuff on here, than i'll put my ACTUAL stuff on here. i mean, i have a band so i would be embarassed if i went out with a guitar playing like this and singing so softly like my then 10 year old brother. no one would like my band at all!!!!!!!! thanks anyways
Theclocketeer

[<-Distortion->]

Excellent work

Awesome, powerful sound going here. When the speed picking kicks in, the guitar tone sounds like As I Lay Dying, who also embraces a brutal distortion. Loved it.

DarKsidE555 responds:

YES!! Thats the sound I want to go for. I dig the style of "As I Lay Dying". Even cooler that it sounds like them! Thanks for the review!!