Its very clear you worked hard on this, i havent been that familiar with the genre, and now having heard this i think ill get into it more. Thanks for the exposure :)
Much better this time around!
I'm very pleased to see you worked hard on this. As some people have said in previous versions, the kick kinda overloads the song in many parts, but nevertheless, the drums work well with the parts in the song. The vocals are pretty nice, your standard metal growl, nothing too special, but well executed. Guitars were well executeed, better then the times before. Great work, show me whenever you have new stuff up.
thanks alot man, i followed some instructions from another author on here, which actually worked out pretty well.
Nice work, melodies are solid, production is excellent.
I thought the guitar was off at first, but another listen through proved me wrong. Good work, the chord pattern is very dynamic, allows for active listening.
Hey man thanks a lot for your compliments.
It's a nice chill song, like someone else mentioned, something i can bob my head to. Good work.
thx man i like the chillage on this track as well
Not too bad
The song is clipping a tad, and some of the synths that come in are out of place in the mix to my ear. I like the atmospheric synth that fades in and out in the background. It's a very unique tune, maybe not techno, but its something. I enjoyed it.
This was very cool. Just a few things to recommend. The transition into the "second half" that you added could be a little smoother. Also, instead of repeating the same snare roll, you could try adding in other varied fills. I like these chords in the new section, sound like 4ths to me. The song ends rather abruptly, maybe make it a huge breakdown with pummeling kick or something? Haha, thats just what i like, do what you want. Nice work.
Lol, yeah, I know....I messed up on "the second" half I guess you can say. I'll work on it in future submisions :) Thanks for the reviews anyways! And the 9. I'll take what I can get lol.
Yay, 6/8 time! I absolutely LOVE electronic music in anything other then 4/4 time. Very nice work.
Haha thanks man :D
Thanks a bunch for the reviews that you left me, i'll make sure to check your stuff when i get a chance to.
This was extremely well done, your effort shines through. Just be careful about the whole sticking bass into two seperate speakers. Bass is almost always better center-panned. Anything else might make your track off balance. Its a delicate situation, but with your hard work ethic that shows here, I'm sure you can work it out.
I learned my lesson about bass lol. I still think that it is a "neat" concept though, two bass lines, but the distortion is noticeable and i agree with you that just one bass line is sufficient.
Thanks for the review, R.
Not bad at all
A little repetitive, but thats to be expected with most electronic music eh? Just check your levels like the guy suggested earlier and youre set.
hah. yeah, glad yo liked it
well, i didnt really notice the static in the backround untill i got reveiws and listend a little more closely. well, thanks! ill review some of your stuff
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